Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Chocolate Orgasm

My hands shake as I desperately
unwrap your jacket
tearing at the last layer
eager to get at your dark, milky skin.

My tongue darting out
gliding over your solid, boxy shape
getting the first taste of you...

My mouth moist with anticipation
slowly, softly taking you in
nibbling on your squared edges
sucking on the sweetness that melts in my mouth.

The bolts of pleasure begin...
streaming through my toes
a newly stoked fire sending
red hot fingers of flame, shooting upward
bursting through my pores.

I lay still
awash in your giving...
my chocolate orgasm.


Written sometime between 1992 and 1993
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Notations by JCK at 9:42 PM

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20 comments:

  1. Jennifer SApril 2, 2008 at 10:48 PM

    Well. (fans herself) Is this how you got E's attention?

    Carry on...

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  2. Jenn @ Juggling LifeApril 2, 2008 at 10:58 PM

    Jeez! It sounds like me opening my Dell box which contained my new power cord!

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  3. JenApril 3, 2008 at 5:15 AM

    Uh, did it just get hot in here? Wow, you really do love chocolate.

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  4. JanetApril 3, 2008 at 6:39 AM

    time for a cold shower . . .

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  5. Angie @ KEEP BELIEVINGApril 3, 2008 at 6:45 AM

    Need a cigarette?

    KEEP BELIEVING

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  6. Tootsie FarklepantsApril 3, 2008 at 9:19 AM

    I'm ready for round two!

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  7. Mrs. G.April 3, 2008 at 9:31 AM

    Excuse me while I go smoke a candy cigarette.

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  8. RimaApril 3, 2008 at 10:32 AM

    GET A ROOM, WOMAN!!!

    Just kidding, that was mahvelous :)

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  9. MadgeApril 3, 2008 at 11:03 AM

    i like it dark.

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  10. flutterApril 3, 2008 at 11:46 AM

    if you'll excuse me, I need a moment to myself....

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  11. furiousBallApril 3, 2008 at 11:53 AM

    Can you re-do this, but eat two chocolate bars at once?

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  12. Manic MommyApril 3, 2008 at 11:58 AM

    So...what exactly were you doing sometime between 1992 and 1993?

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  13. Miss LisaApril 3, 2008 at 12:00 PM

    MMMMMMMMM......
    You must get a bar a chocolate from Vosges (red fire or mo's bacon bar) we are talking multiple orgasms ;)

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  14. LivApril 3, 2008 at 12:49 PM

    you know what i like??

    caramels dipped in dark chocolate with the tiniest flakes of fleur de sel on top.....


    mmmm......

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  15. MamaGeek @ Works For UsApril 3, 2008 at 5:13 PM

    You're a genius AND you made me crave some myself.

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  16. AnonymousApril 3, 2008 at 8:11 PM

    I've had one, so I understand. Hmm. Funny I should feel a craving coming on...

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  17. AnonymousApril 4, 2008 at 3:20 AM

    that was awesome ... and I love that in your "verse" list over there to the right, this particular piece of art is followed by "Ode to a luscious bottom"!
    Have a great day!

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  18. Mighty Morphin' MamaApril 4, 2008 at 9:26 AM

    Terrific! There is just not enough erotic chocolate poetry out there. Love!

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  19. TexashollyApril 5, 2008 at 10:30 AM

    Mmmmmm.

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  20. katydidnotApril 6, 2008 at 10:51 AM

    completely brilliant.

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